About MeMy Name is LanceSao Melendez-Heart and this is my second semester at Cal-Baptist University.I am a Navy MP and I am majoring in Criminal Justice . My dream is to become a Jag officer and serve my country for as long as I am able. I am taking this course to satisfy the requirements for my degree and to grow as a writer.And I feel I have done just that, thanks to my Professor and my smart-thinking tutors. My reflective essay reflects my progress as a student in this class and the dedication I had to improve as a writer.
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Smart Thinking Draft OneFrom this feedback I was able to create clear and focused topic sentences. In order to give the reader a clear idea of what was in each paragraph.
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Smart Thinking Draft TwoFor this draft I was able to get feed on recognizing comma splices, and creating a more direct thesis statement.
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